Friday, December 19, 2008

the toes that WERE bejewelled...

Oh! a short romance it was!
as short as it can get,
when a pair of silver toe rings
with my elegant toes met!

When i have rings on my ears,
and rings on my finger,
would it seem fair
if my toes alone linger?

It was a short-lived honeymoon,
I know i shouldn't have fiddled,
when I took it off yesterday,
it broke right at the middle!

sigh...The End!


Yes, truly 'great' poetry stems from extreme grief! Not that I am acknowledging my poem is great but it was written in deep grief! :D over it now though and time to buy another pair of stronger toe rings!

7 comments:

Unknown said...

HAHAHAHAHAHA..!! ROFL ROFL..!! pls accept my condolence..!!

Lakshmi said...

:D accepted!

Gypsy said...

lol!!! good one.. better than the pol;ar bear :D now thats inspiring. gonna give poetry a shot myself so watchaaaooouut sis! :P

MsRulz said...

Nice :P
Pirandha Naal Nalvaazhthukal :D (Hope you can read this!)

Aparna Radhakrishnan said...

Happy Bday Lakshmi!

Beautiful poem was it! Pricking pain always reaches the audience (atleast to me )faster ..

Lakshmi said...

@ madhan: THANK U da! :)

@ aaps: yeah!

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