Saturday, April 18, 2009

thathastu..!

lakshmi was bored, her hunger sated
rasam n rice n watermelon mated ;)
all this made her think really deep
its time for a blog identity leap!

started with a "pre-blog" lord knows why
"Y this name lakshmi?" many ppl would pry..
a shrug o the shoulder no longer sufficed
so the pre-blog committed an early suicide.

lakshmi remembered looking out the window,
at grasses green, farmers-a-winnow.
women dreaming and children waving,
bidding farewell to strangers unseeing..

so isn't that what life is all about she thinks
contenment, sadness and love on the brink
She sees all this on life's everyday lanes
and blogs it down in betweenthepanes..

ta daa! name changes.. :)

19 comments:

Unknown said...

betweenthepane..!! spell-error!!

Lakshmi said...

@ harish: net speak child..

Gypsy said...

"A-HA!" she declared, "I have just the thing
To while away time this mundane evening!
I'll christen my blog with a name that fits.
And get the spelling wrong,while I'm at it!"

thank you, thank you! :p

Lakshmi said...

to my bewildered friends I say cease!
I write my spellings as I please.
Its a blogger's license
who cares i say,
so leave the dictionary at home
n kick the spell check away!!

thanku thanku* :D

El Furibundo said...
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Gypsy said...

Furi,my child,indeed I'll speak
Only in rhyme for over a week.
But if this proves too much for me,
My shoes'll be filled by good 'ol Lakshmi!

Lakshmi said...

How goes it? the daily rhyme?
Is it accompanied with a mime?
Furi my child are u in pain?
constant rhyme can drive a man insane!!


:D

El Furibundo said...
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Lakshmi said...

chi wat is this i am hearing??
no rhyme, no poem, no word sync?
Furi my child never u fear!
spout the rhyme sis n wipe his tear!

:D

Vignesh said...

Rudely awakened and deeply saddened,
Maddening though this inability to rhyme,
Slink away I shall, like the trodden,
Maybe I should stick to mime.

Joe said...

a bit too late to join the party,
but i must confess humbly
this name change is an answer to the question by urs truly.. (is it?!)
I must confess that
I suck at this rhyming thingy..
big time!!

:)
sam

Unknown said...

oh please, the deuces here,
cease ur non-stop rhyming,
for it might devise fear,
keeping the authors from miming or rhyming..!!

Lakshmi said...
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Lakshmi said...

Welcome sam n harish I say!
Rhyming isn't child's play.
But keep at it and u will see
Its infectious hilarity!

sigh.. :D

Unknown said...

it is infectious, i must say,
for I am rhyming, that, it should convey,
the runes do have a beauty, they proclaim,
well,now the poet in me is back again...!!

Joe said...

Wat naansense.. stop!!

Gypsy said...

To my sis I say, "Ahem!
YOU started this nonsense, Chim!
Now you can rhyme to Furi at will
I retire humbled and ill!"


And indeed,this to Harish I'll say.
This style is after all child's play.
I see you've complained about rhyme one day,
But even comment moderation cant keep you away! :D :D

Lakshmi said...

sis mon sis thou art ill?? :(

vaaat happ?

Aswin Anand T.H. said...

ha ha.. nice one! really enjoyed that poem!